What do you think?

[bookwrite]

Is it something I should write?
First draft

BY

R E R

Technical information for script.

The collection has known peace for 100 years and mainframes rule the vast collection of planets. Particle dissimulators that can move a ship from system to system in seconds are under construction.

Ship - Roosevelt Q The first in her line.
Ship Shape 1 Pyramid made up of Seventy Smaller Pyramids.
The Ship mainframe and power source is the Center of the ship. Witch is a round spinning ball hanging in the middle of the hollow ship.
Ship Mainframe - The downloaded mine of Professor Jan Lon Peterson.
Mainframe now controls weapons, buffers, navigation and engineering. Jumping is just asking the chip in one?s head to jump you. It is now instantaneous.
The ships mainframe has the ability to create a life form in any shape of human but still be part of the mainframe.

The ship's mainframe makes an images of a woman form called Jan who appears as several women who dresses in southern bell to swim suit to Tee shirt with a big smile face on it.


Jack Cane - The Captain. Taking her out on her maiden run.
A mainframe chip is placed in a baby?s head when born and as he or she grows up they get earrings that allow the chip to control different mainframe system. Earrings for communicators. Officers are small flat round. Security and soldiers wear small nose rings. Others earrings are of different shapes.
Rank is by color.

Only Mainframe images do not wear them.

The ship is on a one way mission. All crewmembers except the captain have one of three fatal diseases that will end their lives with in a year.

Crew members.
Doctor Digit: A Separate Mainframe and Figure. Has his own office witch he never leaves. Sign on door reads, The doctor is in. Head shrink
Takes his form as either male or female.

Barra: A Juniper Dog who is also a telepathic. He has a collar instead of earrings.

Mary Cheek: Medical Doctor First time she want into space she got space sick and is allergic to all know space sick pills. Has to excuse herself once in a while to be sick.

Eddit Blake: Jack of all trades engineer.

General Mazit: Holt Worrier. A black race that develop into the most fearless fighters on record. Wears a nose ring instead of earrings.

P5-2: Very old rusty metal robot. Bar tender at officers club.

Chief Engineer Lt. Malinda Kline: Chinese woman. A party girl. Blake?s boss and love interest.

Tinker: Maintenance robot in Blake?s quarters. Blake?s room mate and friend.

Nurse Mate: A nurse robot in sick bay

Thank you.

[spaceham]

Maybe it's just me but that description was kinda incoherent. The only advice I can give as to whether or not you should write it is: Yes. Start writing anything that comes into your head. If it falls apart, then it was never meant to be. If you complete it, great. I've completed nearly 3 full length scripts to date and I think it's safe to say that they're all pretty cra*py. But they all get progressively better. So just start writing and see how it works out.

[karribu]

Just make it origional...try not using stereotypes...the black race...what are they like? Klingons? if so, try something else...good luck, keep us posted.